is this right?

Verse 1:
I used to laugh, now I just sigh
Lost in darkness, I wonder why
Can't do what I love, can't be myself
Trapped in this cage, losing my health
Chorus:
I'm stuck here, feeling so alone
A prisoner of love, turned to stone
I crave freedom, a different life
But fear of losing you, cuts like a knife
Verse 2:
I'm fading away, like a dying flame
No one else cares, it’s such a shame
I need your love, it’s all I know
But this pain is growing, a heavy blow
Chorus:
I'm stuck here, feeling so alone
A prisoner of love, turned to stone
I crave freedom, a different life
But fear of losing you, cuts like a knife